Thursday, 6 October 2011

Marks for the silk scarf

1.http://denias/ hangula. blogspot. com- Grammer was not so ok, length was a bit too short. Story was well narrated. I give him a 7/10.

2. http://innocent-simba/. blogspot.com- I loved the way you narrated the story, I give you a 7/10 it was a little short and i could see some grammatical errors.

3. http://lahia.blogspot.com/ - I give her a 0/10 because silk scarf was not posted.
3.http://tatekulu.blogspot.com- I give her a 0/10 because nothing as been posted on the story of the silk scarf.

Wednesday, 5 October 2011

Marks for the people i follow.

Through the tunnel.
1 http://lahia/. blogspot.com- i give her a 6/10 grammer was bad and she had lots of spelling mistakes. However her work was on time and that derseves praise.

2.http:// tatekulu.blogspot.com- I give her a 5/10 because her grammer was bad, length was also too short.

3.http://Inocent simba.blogspot.com-I give him a 7/10 grammer was not so well done but spelling was great. I can see that he is a very hardworking student.

rymoth.gates.blogspot.com- Work is always posted late and he does not show seriousness.  I give him a 6/10 spelling and grammer was not so proper.

Denias hangula. blogspot.com- I give him a 8/10 because his spelling was great, length was also good but he kept on repeating the same things.

The silk scarf

Setting- It took place in India at a shopping mall; it was known as the oriental plaza in Johannersburg.

Plot
It all began when two mercedes Benz entered the gates of the Oriental Plaza. Two ladies stepped out of the cars, they were namely Mrs. Nebo and Margret. They came with one goal only and that was to find a scarf for Mrs. Nebo. Mrs.Nebo was a lady of high class and didn't just wear any ordinery clothes. She couldn't find anything of her calibre so they had to go to many different stores. Finally the two ladies got the scarf  but Mrs Nebo couldn't afford it though. Mrs Nebo decided to pay with a cheque but Mr Sakur the shop owner didn't accept cheques. Mrs. Nebo was furious and made a huge scene out of the situation. The argument went on for some time until some people managed to convience Mr.Sakur to give the scarf to Mrs.Nebo. He did something better than just giving the scarf to her; he gave it to her for free.


Characters
Mrs.Nebo- She was married to a very important government official. She was also a very difficult woman; who was very outspoken. She enjoyed shopping and always got what she wanted. She was of a high class and always saw herself as very important.

Margret- She was a close friend of Mrs.Nebo. She was more reserved and very patient.
She  was not so outspoken. She also was not really of a high class, she was more humble.