1.http://denias/ hangula. blogspot. com- Grammer was not so ok, length was a bit too short. Story was well narrated. I give him a 7/10.
2. http://innocent-simba/. blogspot.com- I loved the way you narrated the story, I give you a 7/10 it was a little short and i could see some grammatical errors.
3. http://lahia.blogspot.com/ - I give her a 0/10 because silk scarf was not posted.
3.http://tatekulu.blogspot.com- I give her a 0/10 because nothing as been posted on the story of the silk scarf.
Thursday, 6 October 2011
Wednesday, 5 October 2011
Marks for the people i follow.
Through the tunnel.
1 http://lahia/. blogspot.com- i give her a 6/10 grammer was bad and she had lots of spelling mistakes. However her work was on time and that derseves praise.
2.http:// tatekulu.blogspot.com- I give her a 5/10 because her grammer was bad, length was also too short.
3.http://Inocent simba.blogspot.com-I give him a 7/10 grammer was not so well done but spelling was great. I can see that he is a very hardworking student.
rymoth.gates.blogspot.com- Work is always posted late and he does not show seriousness. I give him a 6/10 spelling and grammer was not so proper.
Denias hangula. blogspot.com- I give him a 8/10 because his spelling was great, length was also good but he kept on repeating the same things.
1 http://lahia/. blogspot.com- i give her a 6/10 grammer was bad and she had lots of spelling mistakes. However her work was on time and that derseves praise.
2.http:// tatekulu.blogspot.com- I give her a 5/10 because her grammer was bad, length was also too short.
3.http://Inocent simba.blogspot.com-I give him a 7/10 grammer was not so well done but spelling was great. I can see that he is a very hardworking student.
rymoth.gates.blogspot.com- Work is always posted late and he does not show seriousness. I give him a 6/10 spelling and grammer was not so proper.
Denias hangula. blogspot.com- I give him a 8/10 because his spelling was great, length was also good but he kept on repeating the same things.
The silk scarf
Setting- It took place in India at a shopping mall; it was known as the oriental plaza in Johannersburg.
Plot
It all began when two mercedes Benz entered the gates of the Oriental Plaza. Two ladies stepped out of the cars, they were namely Mrs. Nebo and Margret. They came with one goal only and that was to find a scarf for Mrs. Nebo. Mrs.Nebo was a lady of high class and didn't just wear any ordinery clothes. She couldn't find anything of her calibre so they had to go to many different stores. Finally the two ladies got the scarf but Mrs Nebo couldn't afford it though. Mrs Nebo decided to pay with a cheque but Mr Sakur the shop owner didn't accept cheques. Mrs. Nebo was furious and made a huge scene out of the situation. The argument went on for some time until some people managed to convience Mr.Sakur to give the scarf to Mrs.Nebo. He did something better than just giving the scarf to her; he gave it to her for free.
Characters
Mrs.Nebo- She was married to a very important government official. She was also a very difficult woman; who was very outspoken. She enjoyed shopping and always got what she wanted. She was of a high class and always saw herself as very important.
Margret- She was a close friend of Mrs.Nebo. She was more reserved and very patient.
She was not so outspoken. She also was not really of a high class, she was more humble.
Plot
It all began when two mercedes Benz entered the gates of the Oriental Plaza. Two ladies stepped out of the cars, they were namely Mrs. Nebo and Margret. They came with one goal only and that was to find a scarf for Mrs. Nebo. Mrs.Nebo was a lady of high class and didn't just wear any ordinery clothes. She couldn't find anything of her calibre so they had to go to many different stores. Finally the two ladies got the scarf but Mrs Nebo couldn't afford it though. Mrs Nebo decided to pay with a cheque but Mr Sakur the shop owner didn't accept cheques. Mrs. Nebo was furious and made a huge scene out of the situation. The argument went on for some time until some people managed to convience Mr.Sakur to give the scarf to Mrs.Nebo. He did something better than just giving the scarf to her; he gave it to her for free.
Characters
Mrs.Nebo- She was married to a very important government official. She was also a very difficult woman; who was very outspoken. She enjoyed shopping and always got what she wanted. She was of a high class and always saw herself as very important.
Margret- She was a close friend of Mrs.Nebo. She was more reserved and very patient.
She was not so outspoken. She also was not really of a high class, she was more humble.
Sunday, 25 September 2011
Through the tunnel
Setting- At the beach, on a wild bay.
Plot
Jerry was just a little boy. He liked to do things that any normal boy would do. He liked to swimm and spend time with his mom. Jerry did not have a father and his mom was all that he had. Jerry was everything that his mom had. On a holiday vacation jerry and his mom spend everyday at the beach; relaxing and doing all sorts of exciting things. Jerry discovered the wild bay and really wanted to go closer. He knew that his mom would not like to go alone to the beach but he got permission to go to the wild bay. Jerry met some little boys, he was excited to meet people his own age. They could not understand eachother but he was happy. He finally discovered a tunnel under the water, he was so determined to swimm through it. He tried several times, got home with a bleeding nose but that did not stop him. He got swimming goggles from his mom and he gave it his best that day.Jerry finally managed to swimm through the tunnel.
Main charecter
Jerry was the main charecter; he was just 11 years old. Jerry was a white english boy, and he did not have a father. Jerry was such a considerate little boy, always considering his moms feelings. He was a loner because he did not have friends, his mom was all he had. He was such a courages boy, always ready for new adventures. He was not like other ordinery little boys because he enjoyed doing dangerous things.
Plot
Jerry was just a little boy. He liked to do things that any normal boy would do. He liked to swimm and spend time with his mom. Jerry did not have a father and his mom was all that he had. Jerry was everything that his mom had. On a holiday vacation jerry and his mom spend everyday at the beach; relaxing and doing all sorts of exciting things. Jerry discovered the wild bay and really wanted to go closer. He knew that his mom would not like to go alone to the beach but he got permission to go to the wild bay. Jerry met some little boys, he was excited to meet people his own age. They could not understand eachother but he was happy. He finally discovered a tunnel under the water, he was so determined to swimm through it. He tried several times, got home with a bleeding nose but that did not stop him. He got swimming goggles from his mom and he gave it his best that day.Jerry finally managed to swimm through the tunnel.
Main charecter
Jerry was the main charecter; he was just 11 years old. Jerry was a white english boy, and he did not have a father. Jerry was such a considerate little boy, always considering his moms feelings. He was a loner because he did not have friends, his mom was all he had. He was such a courages boy, always ready for new adventures. He was not like other ordinery little boys because he enjoyed doing dangerous things.
Wednesday, 7 September 2011
Creating a blogger account.
Creating an account was such a fun expirience, knowing that most students are computer illiterate.
I had no idea that i would enjoy this expirience. I heard students complaining about how borring and time wasting this is. Some had so much anger and were lost for words. I had a bright smile on my face; knowing the benefits this exercise has for all the students at large. It is strange how we youngsters can be so ignorrant at times. Creating a blog should be the most interresting thing to do and to look forward to. This teaches us how to use technology. I loved every momment of this exercise, people might call me borring but this is who i am. I love to learn new skills and add to my intellectual capacity.
I had no idea that i would enjoy this expirience. I heard students complaining about how borring and time wasting this is. Some had so much anger and were lost for words. I had a bright smile on my face; knowing the benefits this exercise has for all the students at large. It is strange how we youngsters can be so ignorrant at times. Creating a blog should be the most interresting thing to do and to look forward to. This teaches us how to use technology. I loved every momment of this exercise, people might call me borring but this is who i am. I love to learn new skills and add to my intellectual capacity.
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